Open Poetry #36 |
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Come Softly |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City ![]() |
Come softly silver rain, come softly now my thoughts, heavy as September's reddest hue in hours shed these patched conceits of dry leaves, curled along the Summer road, become some vast appalling wilderness, your hands, an Autumn dream, casts a thick red sap upon the swollen planes of my body, crouched in a stealth pathos of gray leopard cells, as they well, wild with faith and thirsty prayer, come away from these stale Summer breads, for your kisses are a much softer fate than wisdom, come the ease of rain, softly silver rain, stay the solemn night with leaves, bedeck my perilous flesh, let it ascend its gray latitudes in blizzards of dogwood, kindling songs on paperchains my hands, string an alphabet of silence, tied by hours of rope, inviolate, palms clasped to glass, two hummingbirds, quiet stilled,joined,unbind to close into fists, come Fall, the season of bearing, the rich red earth darkens and drinks our tears, and now, never the ease of rain, falling, come softly, softly silver rain. ![]() so ENDS the blackbook of hours... 2005 (C) babygirLPress **Intoxicant to the SouL** [This message has been edited by babygirlwlove (08-26-2005 08:12 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
How does one reply to something so absolutely perfect and find the proper words??? Perfect... Absolutely perfect BBG. So pleased to see your words on these pages tonight. yesterday is gone |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Picture me clapping ![]() ![]() This reads like part of a beautiful song Mari, honest! come away from these stale Summer breads, for your kisses are a much softer fate than wisdom, come the ease of rain, softly silver rain, and this, oh mercy me! bedeck my perilous flesh, let it ascend its gray latitudes in blizzards of dogwood, kindling songs on paperchains You are surely a sight for these very sore eyes this evening. Brava to you! I am hoping that this a new one coming out? ![]() I can't resist giving you the plug you so much deserve by linking the poets here to some of your books that are sold at Amazon.com. http://print.google.com/print?q=Mari+Laureano&oi=print And the lastest is absolutely awesome! http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/1413743005/qid=1125020387/sr=1-3/ref=sr_1_3/102-5442017-6952141?v=glance&s=books |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
All I can think of to reply is absolutely beautiful!! Hugs, ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. I asked today, some directly, but mostly just a silent plea that Pip be my place of poetry sanctuary again. I'd be much remiss if I didn't thank you for this stunning contribution to what I will long remember as a perfect day. thank you |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
wonderful work ![]() |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Gentle Spirit~thank you for the warm gesture of welcome...it means the world to me~~~ gary'sgirl~wow. thank you for the lovely response. Sharon~ you always bring me a smile...thank you, for everything~ Serenity~the need for sanctuary is one shared deeply here...thanks, love~ Kaoru~thanks for the looksee~ **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well girl, where have you been, and you come back with such a grand entrance...I've missed you, and this brilliant shine of gold is why...thank you |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
LeeJ~ thank you, thank you, thank you...for the warm reply... it is good to see you as well, and to share in these blue pages... ~baby |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Little one... it is good to read your poetry again. And this one tops the list of the favorites... ![]() |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Sunshine~~~~ thank you...so pleased you enjoyed this one.... ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yanno? I thought I'd commented on this.... Then realized I'd just been chewing on it Savoring.... My pleasure, as always, to read you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mari, I had to come back to read this again today and yet, I find I still do not have the words to do this fine write a complete justice, so please just know that I truly do think it a fabulous write. |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
This is so beautiful: "come away from these stale Summer breads, for your kisses are a much softer fate than wisdom, come the ease of rain, softly silver rain" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
come softly, my love lie with me in the remnants of summer, lost paradise sinking beyond channels our minds cannot perceive as the ice queen her bony fingers lay claim to the back of my throat i breathe and am stifled by your presence am humbled beneath the downy fir of your skin where I take refuge this very morning the last of light before your sister retreats and introduces another with flowing psychedelic tress to remind us just how short life is. ____________________________________ I bow to you, Mari. The only way I felt fit to reply. That was amazing. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
wranx~ pleasure's mine, my dear hermit...glad I could provide a thought or two to chew on~ My Gentle Spirit~ your presence and support are my reward...thank you again, dear lady~ eminor angel~ thank you, kindly~ my sister, my sister, littlewing~ in whose words I find a twin refuge~thank you, love for the moving reply to my lunacy~ ~so much love~ ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
![]() Suzie, your response was awesome! You both can write out nature like no tomorrow! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is beautiful. The images are rich and full and the feel is peaceful, awaiting harvest. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Sharon~thanks again for the looksee...it is a pleasure writing with littlewing...and I do believe in the archives...there may still reside such a treasure.... nan~ thank you...and yes, you are right on target... ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
niiiice..... well done ma'am.. well done indeed... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
there is Sharon, we already did one, where was you? *smile* LOL . . . SO glad you liked, Mari. If only my mind could travel as far and quick as your own. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
POETRYYYYY yes....sounds of pure poetry |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Chief~ thank you, love... littlewing~ you are a doll...and an inspiration~ midnite~ thank you for the look inward~ ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you are poetry in motion, moving in every way.... |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
greeneyes~ thank you for the kind reply~ ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
so many awesome lines in this.. enjoyed! hugs, g |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow that picture says a ton! (Now wasn't that the most poetic thing to say?) I still am a picture with the words kind of girl you know? Art not only helps visually take me where my mind should be, but keeps it on track. I loved Nan's comment, right on! Came back to save this - but you didn't answer me - is this a new book? Or do I just bust a gasket waiting? ![]() Going to archives to find that duet - don't remember you and Suzie writing together - but then age is getting me. Awesome write this - up it goes for another round. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I need to peek in here more often. Sorry I missed this..I can't seem to come up with the proper words for this..this was beautiful and amazing and wow... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
g~ thanks for stopping in on this~ Sharon~yes, yes...I added the graphic after I posted the poem...glad you caught it...and as for the book, the blackbook of hours, is a journal I am keeping...but I have not submitted it for publication...and don't intend to at this time. My latest book however, The FairyTale Journals will be available in about 8 weeks...)I'll annouce the date as soon as the Publisher gives it to me in the annoucements & links forum) and it holds some of my best work (at least in my editor's opinion). Cienwyn~thanks for the peek~ ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Whooo Hoooo! Marked on my calendar to check Amazon in 8 weeks ro so, and I can't wait! I have read samplings of "The FairyTale Journals, and now will get the complete work in one book. With colder weather coming it is wonderful to hunker down with a new feast for my mind and eyes, especially when you wrote it! I will shhhh now ![]() |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
My dearest Sharon, you have been non-stop support and encouragement for me since day 1 on these blue pages...and I want you to know how moved I am by your kindness and spirit ((thank you))... I am thrilled you are excited about the new book...it truly does represent a time of immense spiritual growth for me...and I hope it will touch its readers in that way... sleek quicksilver hug, from New York~~~~~ ~Mari~ **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you, James~ **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Come softly, indeed... Very much enjoyed http://www.mysticwicks.com |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Ringo~ so pleased you enjoyed this~ ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
stilled,joined,unbind to close into fists, come Fall, the season of bearing, the rich red earth darkens and drinks our tears, and now, never the ease of rain, falling, come softly, softly silver rain. ~babyg HOWWWL~~~ sweetness the way you capture nature is great ...and to mix it with your style = more howwwllls lol peaz and loves ~wolfie |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Wolfman! Thanks for digging this up, love~ ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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