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My body moves on...
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My body moves on... |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx 
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Pain is weaving itself around my numbness Making it hard to write. Puzzled I seek understanding Surrealism has taken control Anger breathes out the fog I am incased in The bleak meaning of it all has not been exposed. I tumble down the steps of sanity I am crippled by the night Faint shadows of what it used to be like, haunt me I want to hear you, yet my ears have been blinded. I want to see you, yet my eyes can not feel. I think I have stepped over the edge. I want to lie down and rest awhile Yet like the good robot that I am… My body moves on... Grieving day Sixteen, Where to go from here.... |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Grieving never gets any easier. And like robots we all just march on. I could identify with you fully with this one. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Faint shadows of you used to be. Maybe fresh beginnings of a better shadow to be? |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
It can take a lifetime It can take days to come back years I dont know how I would handled more We back away after one, then two then three but My mother took 6 years My wife's aunt out of the blue My neighbour over the road But one was Ans Stella was cancer, diabetic and loosing a close friend Ron was cancer in the brain and everywhere else Death is not personal in how it hits We all wear out and try to blame ourselves Loosing a love is a joy Because it isn't there And you can live it for years There is a difference Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Offering hugs, in understanding. His untimely death made no sense to me, either. Somehow, I think he would want you to keep moving forward though, creating new positive pictures of humanity, continuing to share the legacy of his POV when you can.   |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
jennirey I am grieving year 36, and moving on to 37 with more understanding. My best to you.  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Part of you will go on...part never will, but even that part will grow and learn to understand...as Martie said. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
When tragedy strikes us, it is so hard to understand sometimes. Though time may not heal, it does help us to carry on....somewhat. Big hugs to you, Ethel  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
jen This poem moved my soul. Being profound in the most poetic way.. And your other replies confirm, Love in the most inspring way Still does exist in humanity... I have asked the energy entity to send you balance.. -----------ice ><> ><> |
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