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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2005-11-16 11:06 PM


Falling in love

Scattered leaves on autumn days
when the sky is so clear you can see forever
may the sun not blind your eyes.

As a fire roars and warms your cheeks in winter
may you linger in the slow burn
melting from the inside out.

May love spring like an early daffodil
that welcomes you home
reigning in your garden for all your days.

And when the summer heat rises
may the breeze blow your hair off your face
and wrap around your neck.

Basking in the love that stirs you~

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Martie
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1 posted 2005-11-16 11:18 PM


Lori

How very beautiful this is!!  It is always such a pleasure to see your name here and read your poetry.

HopeS
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2 posted 2005-11-17 12:13 PM


Beautiful images , for every season there is a reason

Hope

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3 posted 2005-11-17 12:27 PM


Hi Bluesy!! Good to read your awesome words once again. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2005-11-17 12:32 PM


Thank you ladies, love is kind!  I suppose that was my message here.  

"My day will come"     Thanks again and hugs~  


ctowen
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5 posted 2005-11-17 05:52 AM


stirring ...... it does seem to have that feel, doesn't it!!

     caught up in the mix  lol

               great to see you!!

       ALWAYS ...

                              CT

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2005-11-17 06:55 AM


And when the summer heat rises
may the breeze blow your hair off your face
and wrap around your neck.

Basking in the love that stirs you~


just lovely Lori (  but what else  would one expect~~~)  
p.s. You've Got Mail
love you,

M

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-11-17 07:13 AM


hmmmm daymm I do like this one ms bluezy
Duncan
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8 posted 2005-11-17 07:47 AM


"May love spring like an early daffodil
that welcomes you home
reigning in your garden for all your days."

Given the temperature here this morning, I couldn't resist a spring fix!!  Thanks Bluesy...  

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2005-11-17 08:27 AM


Awesome images here Bluesy...
Beautiful write.
TD

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10 posted 2005-11-17 09:28 AM


Lori, I could not help but sigh as I read your warm words of loving.

~ "May love spring like an early daffodil" in your life, Lovely Lori!

The beauty within you, rivals your beauty without! ~ and that, is saying a great deal! lol

Hugs with love,
Linda

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2005-11-17 10:24 AM


"...love that stirs you"

is there any other kind?  

So very good to see you here Lori!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Robert Frazier
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12 posted 2005-11-17 02:46 PM


"love that stirs"

have missed your sweet voice!

hugs,
Robert

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13 posted 2005-11-17 06:10 PM


Hey Lori...


soooo good to see you here, I love this too, brings much hope and shows your warm heart....hugsssss you...

SmartChick
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14 posted 2005-11-17 07:09 PM


This is a wonderful write.
inkedgoddess
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15 posted 2005-11-17 08:00 PM


And when the summer heat rises
may the breeze blow your hair off your face
and wrap around your neck.

Basking in the love that stirs you~
*****************************************

and may we all float on in your submarine
of amor dear blonde goddess

BluesSerenade
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16 posted 2005-11-17 10:42 PM



You all are a fine bunch, truly...
I thank you always for your kindness,
  and for taking the time to read me.  

Many hugs~

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17 posted 2005-11-19 01:33 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is the most beautiful, enchanting comeback, sweet friend, I long ever soooooooo much to experience these feelings when I fall in love for the first time and be kissed for the first time, it has to be the most heavenly feeling in the world! (sigh) Yay, this made me feel all tingly and chirpy inside, dearest friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

icebox
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18 posted 2005-11-19 09:33 AM


Well, if that is love, then I sure hope you are in it!  A fine write deserves a fine reward.

*smile*

EagleOne
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19 posted 2006-01-11 05:11 AM


This one just makes me sit back and sigh!!!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

Susan Caldwell
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20 posted 2006-01-11 09:00 AM


wow...

Dunc and I were just talking about you the other day....wondering how you were.

I hope all is well Bluesy!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

miscellanea
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21 posted 2006-01-11 07:04 PM


Bluesy,

   So good to read your poetry again!  Love Falling in Love!  So sweet it is!

   miscellanea

tracie66
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22 posted 2006-01-12 01:55 AM


OMG!

simply devine, well penned.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Duncan
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23 posted 2006-01-12 02:10 AM


LOL...yes, we were!  
Funny, I didn't read anything about Californey fallin' off the edge of the earth.  

Hey Bluesy...write.     

iliana
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24 posted 2006-01-12 05:30 PM


Bluesy girl, this is divine!  *hugging you* ...jo
Klassy Lassy
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25 posted 2006-02-19 07:33 PM


This is so sensual, love in all its seasons.  Enticing, but softly compelling.

Beautiful!

nakdthoughts
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26 posted 2007-04-26 07:10 PM


Basking in the love that stirs you~


~~~missing you~~~

M

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