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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2005-12-10 07:29 AM

Little girl lost, so far from home
Who would have thought you’d love alone?
Your journey’s path was from your heart
You sought new life, a new love’s start…

But fantasies, now in the past
You found could break like shattered glass
Too many pieces scattered round
And some misplaced, ne’er to be found…

But poetess, and dreamer still
You pick up paper, ink and quill
It just feels right, to share some time
With those of literary mind…

So, maybe some things can’t be lost
And paths are waiting to be crossed
Where friends still share life’s curving road
To help each other ease the load…

And maybe, little girl, you’ll see
That losing sometimes sets us free…

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-12-10 08:15 AM

But poetess, and dreamer still
You pick up paper, ink and quill
It just feels right, to share some time
With those of literary mind…

So, maybe some things can’t be lost
And paths are waiting to be crossed
Where friends still share life’s curving road
To help each other ease the load…

~*~

Amen, sunnyone...

and welcome home!

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-12-10 09:02 AM

Your words still have a way to touch the heart so strong they bring tears to the eyes and remind me of memories...the way you talk about your friends here and how wonderful it feels to feel their embrace as you share your inner self touched me deeply....I know you are dearly charished by those whose words wrap around you to help make your steps lighter....**big hugs*** take care, loved one....

[This message has been edited by Startime55 (12-10-2005 09:55 AM).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2005-12-10 01:11 PM

Brava!
I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2005-12-10 02:50 PM

Beautiful expression of compassion and love;
Especially liked the last few lines!

misc

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2005-12-10 03:34 PM

And maybe, little girl, you’ll see
That losing sometimes sets us free…

So true....sometimes, my friend.

With love and hugs,
Ethel

(psssttt!!! Lookie what I'm learning to do!!)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-12-10 06:19 PM

Nice writing...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2005-12-10 06:33 PM

(big angel hugs) Oh Sunnyone, you have such a loving, golden heart that truly feels for everyone, dearest friend, I absolutely agree too that what doesn't kill us only makes us stronger, for I experienced too many sad days and heartache as a little boy, but they have only helped build my character and understand who I am and that I am capable, I am pure of heart and I can succeed, and now I've never felt happier and sexier in my life! (angel comfort hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart sends angel comfort hugs out to this someone in need and I offer holiday happiness hugs too just for good measure, yay, this is absolutely beautiful and touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

8 posted 2005-12-11 01:09 AM

Thank you everyone, for your wonderful replies! It's so nice to get your feelings on my work, and always appreciated, you know? When I first started writing this, it sounded a bit solemn, but the point I was trying to make was in the end, and I see now that it worked just fine...thank you, my friends...'S'

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

9 posted 2006-03-14 01:15 PM

So sadly true, but then, who would we be without our losses? They're just as valuable as our gains--and sometimes, even more so.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2007-04-26 07:08 PM

"losing sometimes sets us free…"

just wanting to "raise " some of my favorite poets~~

M

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