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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-11-16 08:51 PM

This throbbing ache, consequences
of a quest, a seeking of that which
mesmerizes, fantasizes, yet remains
illusive . . . and parched lips thirst
of the silver stream of water’s
sweet salvation.

Sequestered, craving the quell of
a fire that rages amongst the primal
fold, basking upon the chill of dark
indigo air, breathed laboriously,
captivating in it’s flow and weave
within bones which feel the sinuous
stretch of outreached anorexic
arms.

Yet then, when a groping grasp feels only the
coolness of unseen air...and a hunger
of desperation grows into a raging
twist of a river’s bend, shall the
completeness of a meteoric crescendo
bring an unearthly calm to veins that
pulse of a moment only seen once
before . . .

In mountainous swells of dreams.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2005-11-16 09:06 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts Magnus, and the ending was perfect poetry in motion~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-11-17 03:34 PM

"...the
completeness of a meteoric crescendo
bring an unearthly calm to veins..."

~ Whew! Thanks! I needed that!

I know I am in for a stirring of my emotions in one way or another, no matter what you write!

Linda

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2005-11-19 09:45 AM

This is deliberately written as rough quality

but quality it is

Dave

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2005-11-19 08:15 PM

dont know exactly what to say, so i am just going to let you know i stopped and read it, i shall read it again.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2005-11-19 09:55 PM

I'll have whatever you're drinking, Barry!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2005-11-24 10:29 AM

...of dreams...y'had me goin' there, fella-- you must be a poet or something!

Still going, in fact; now drifting back along a sequence of dreams I've had during my life, that goes back more than four decades, and the latest of them about two hours ago....

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