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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-11-16 03:07 PM



these thoughts inside
how do i get them to subside the racing everyday
throughout my bloody mind

the pain the nervousness the tension
its like a permanent mind vacation

take me to the clouds to the stars above for I no longer
can deal with this plague

creep up on me take my fun away ruin the seeds of love and shoot my power down

I'm so tired my eyes are getting weak my heart is falling
and my mind is becoming weak

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-11-16 05:02 PM


I have felt that way before Julie~~ it does get better. Although there are those occasional "off" days...


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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2005-11-16 07:38 PM


Being chronically ill sucks and having your bf desert you sucks to

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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