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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-11-16 07:05 AM

What Lies Ahead

Feeling the pressure of the wind,
a change is in the air.

Can you see the truth beyond my soul?
The waves of thoughts that
reach the edge of my struggles?
The generated words
that create an art of silence?

The kiss of a smile in dreamscapes
awakes me each morning
to complete the emptiness of the night.

Reaching out, can you feel their impact?
Or are there days of coldness ...
ahead?

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Courage2Survive
Junior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 32

1 posted 2005-11-16 07:23 AM

Very good poem, I enjoyed the read.

<3 Heart 2 Heart <3
«*:·. God Bless
         .·:* Love and
         *:·.  Happiness,
            *«        Kellie Cantrell

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2005-11-16 07:24 AM

Would a hug do

((((((((((M)))))))))

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-11-16 07:53 AM

enjoyed the entire write, but this

The kiss of a smile in dreamscapes
awakes me each morning
to complete the emptiness of the night.

this was beatiful

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-11-17 07:03 AM

The kiss of a smile in dreamscapes
awakes me each morning
to complete the emptiness of the night.

is the way I feel each morning , Lee. Thankyou for reading and responding.

Bernie,

Thank you Kellie..and I love your new name

M

fmlbarebackrider2001
Member

since 2005-11-16

Posts 138
West Texas, United States

5 posted 2005-11-17 11:41 PM

Very moving and more than just a little touching.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2005-11-18 01:28 AM

"Feeling the pressure of the wind,
a change is in the air."

Sometimes change is a way to cope, or a new much needed beginning.
If we had daylight all the time we wouldn’t appreciate it as much as we do by having a night before, and after. Something to look forward to, a new day. Maybe? No?

Excellent write. I always enjoy your work.

God Bless.
JL

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