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a love song
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a love song |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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huddle with me, between that world just for a little while before i go… we are broad with forthcoming powers eternal battle to create that first unaccompanied translation you know the one… that tastes imagination, creation & love undressing thoughts i shall smile very thoughtful indeed… this water rat woman deserves to be drowned in grey whiskers of devoted friendship i expect, tiny wings of silver spray softly kissing my face, my forehead, my neck… pink bloomed floral places watching the symphony between us turn to puckering handfuls of sweet herbs proud! with noble melodious incense white gardenias… then we… part with unselfish dreams taking visions with us on our separate ways so that we might consider the flattery amongst charming things rubbing my eyes once in a while just to listen, to a city of angel’s song first thing at dawn when orange moon slips away when i am alone… …and unfriendly |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Lee.. With just the right touch of melancholy. Much enjoyed smiling lady. Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ "huddle with me, between that world just for a little while before i go…" You sing a sad, sweet and true love song.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ 'undressing thoughts i shall smile' A mighty muse is playing in your inkwell, splashing the loveliest of thoughts~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
LeeJ I love to read everything you write so beautifuly feminine. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
such a a sad but true poem this is, and it is yet I feel a pretty song, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Maybe alone but never unfriendly.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You know what, Lee? You are one of the most amazing writers I have ever read. I do not get in here as often as I wish and forgive me for not always responding, it surely does not mean I am not reading. But when I read your words, your thoughts, My God . . . it is like merchurochrome (sp?) (remember that stuff?) stings for a moment, leaves you feeling better and always always leaves a stain on your skin . . . as you do with your words . . . |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
YES! YES! Lee, you have a magical way of transporting me through your imagery; it is as if I am on emotional journey, then safely placed at my doorstep at its end. Lovely. miscellanea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice....James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
then we… part with unselfish dreams taking visions with us on our separate ways so that we might consider the flattery amongst charming things rubbing my eyes once in a while just to listen, to a city of angel’s song ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Like birds in flight signifies, that all is, and will be, right in the heavens. You leave me pondering so much, LeeJ. Thank you.... I'll rest easier after finding you tucked in here tonight. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“then we… part with unselfish dreams taking visions with us on our separate ways so that we might consider the flattery amongst charming things rubbing my eyes once in a while just to listen, to a city of angel’s song first thing at dawn when orange moon slips away when i am alone… …and unfriendly” I swam through the currents of your words, weaving about, and occasionally rising to the surface for air, peaking at that dawn and orange moon, until it slowly slipped away. I was totally immersed in this wonderful write Lee J.  JL  |
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