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Walking in the Rain |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Walking in the Rain I walked a goodly way today Until the clouds turned angry grey I saw it post horizons ground Full of passions light and sound Felt the wind upon my face Wrapping me in rain like lace Dipping me tomorrows tallow Filling me with aching marrow It drummed upon my back in roar Reached into my very core Stirred the passions of my mind With lightening bolts magnetic find And I was swept it would appear Into the hollows of my fear Fired through a rifles bore Into the tangle of my core And with sensations non could bear I screamed into the bloody air |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
That actually sounds quite refreshing, Sy... as long as no damage is done... Good morning to you. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sounds like you were in some scary rain! I have rain today but mine is soft and sooooo comforting...  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Welcome to MY world, and just think, it's from now til June.  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed your poem, as always, It might be refreshing, as Mark said, I’ve always found a walk in the rain good to stimulate thoughts Till it becomes too cold Then it’s only good to numb feelings Which I also need From time to time. Gloom |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ *giggling* at myself ... I find the showers soooo refreshing ... the lightning, frightening ... the thunder, wonder~ BUT ... now you've got me reminiscing and doing a little soft shoe, singing along as I remember Gene Kelly and Debbie Reynolds doing their little dancing while 'Singing In The Rain~ Thanks for the memory to brighten my day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 hearing me some pitter patters' thought brought something here that can't be bought... with Your...  . |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I have an extra umbrella, if you want to use it. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...Sounds like my kind of storm!! I hope you are warm and dry now! |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
loved the flow of this. Always loved a walk in the rain except of course when rain takes its violent path! A refreshing, cleansing read! Thanks! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I loved this Sy.....indeed rain can be refreshing, even when walking in it....  ~~**~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ And today ... Johnnie Ray dances cross my memory~ Remember that one, 'Just Walking In The Rain' ? --------------------------------------------- "Just Walking In The Rain" Johnnie Ray "Just walking in the rain Getting soaking wet Torturing my heart By trying to forget Just walking in the rain So alone and blue All because my heart Still remembers you People come to windows They always stare at me Shaking their heads in sorrow Saying, who can that fool be Just walking in the rain Thinking how we met Knowing things could change Somehow I can't forget ---- Instrumental Interlude ---- (Just walking in the rain) (Walking in the rain) (Walking in the rain) (Just walking in the rain) (All day I ....) People come to their windows They always stare at me Their shaking their heads in sorrow Saying, who can that fool be (Now who can he be) Just walking in the rain (Walking in the rain) Thinking how we met (Walking in the rain) Knowing things could change (Walking in the rain) Somehow I can't forget (Walking in the rain ....)" Lyrics Credit ... online Google Search~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Walking in the rain... That seems so refreshing..though you were soaking wet. we had a drizzle of rain today..I wish now that I have walked in it.. I have this thing for the rain and its smell and sound.. Thank you for bringing it all back |
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