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Twenty Or Less...#219
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Twenty Or Less...#219 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS…#219 Copyright 2005 by: Mark V Sheldon hardening arteries and narrow valves labyrinths fill your words demanding a senseless closing how empty your unraveling You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ I felt the helplessness of ravaged mind-aging in this one~ Nicely conveyed~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Brava Mark !! Well done. Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK You sunk the nail with one hammers blow. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Mark!! Good to read you again!  Excellent write in so few words..well done! Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a bloody good write  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
tightness of breath tunneling with no light at the end of... tangled in the fibers of your unraveling M |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hey there Marge: I think you nailed it. Thanks for sharing. Hi Chris: thank you kindly for the note... Seymour: ...at least I didn't hit my finger, right? Hey Nancy! Been a while, but had a moment to poke in and catch up... Thanks, as always, for your and support.Kacy... not sure it's either, but I'm always happy to see your .Maureen: ...an interesting twist... I do enjoy your "paraphrased reflections"... (hey: that would make for an interesting poem, no...?  nudge, nudge...)-MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Hi Mark.... nice to see you back with your pack of twenty or less... unraveling.. mmmm...... to slowly break down and die to stop walking and just lie ....down till all around you cry --- A thought-provoking piece -as always- and perhaps even a bit frightening. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Indeed, My Melody... Indeed. An observation, contemplation, and interpretation all in one. Thank you for the thoughts... More soon... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mark, you and Ericc both have a way with the short and sweet... Don't ever ask me to pick a winner...for you both are...and wow, what a message within this one. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Intriguing ~ both literally and figuratively! Good to read your thoughts again! Giving you a big, warm, welcome-back, cyber hug!  Linda |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hi Barry -- thank you for your kind words. The longer poems require more time than I have at the moment, but when they flow through me, I'll be sure to share them again. Until then, I'm just happy to sneak in a little TOL here and there... Thank you very much, Linda... a hug and a smile is 1/2 the incentive for returning to this rejuvinating oasis filled with caring and sensitive individuals. It's always good to be back, if even for a little while... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Very Good write Mark I can feel this. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Gosh, Bernie... I hope not! But seriously: thank you for the read and remarks... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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