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RMW
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0 posted 2005-11-12 11:23 AM


Your Face

How could you know
I'd all but given up on verse,
and, to that place between the lines,
retreated,
waiting
for something.
Then you came, wondering questions
with your eyes,
and with your words,
needing.

RMW

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-11-12 11:27 AM


"I'd all but given up on verse,
and to that place between the lines,
retreated,
waiting
for something"

yes....I like this lots

Martie
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2 posted 2005-11-12 11:28 AM


Bob

Hi...I know that space between the lines very well, I've spent much time there lately.  I'm glad that someone inspired you to move back into your words.  I've always admired your poetic soul!  

RMW
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3 posted 2005-11-12 11:54 AM


Sea and Martie .... Thank you ladies. You are too kind. Bob
blueKilo
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4 posted 2005-11-12 05:31 PM


oh man. I can read your poems all day long.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2005-11-12 05:42 PM


to never give up on verse
those feelings
hidden between the lines
waiting, always waiting
to answer the needed...

You can inspire you know?
well done, Robert

M

PoetessFlamme
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6 posted 2005-11-13 03:52 AM


another beautiful piece!
Sunshine
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7 posted 2005-11-13 08:29 AM



I'm glad that face
put your words
into view
again!


Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2005-11-14 11:40 AM


You've been busy!

  whomever the inspire is, I am glad they have got you to writing again..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
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9 posted 2005-11-14 06:13 PM


You just keep looking at that face..
if this is the work she inspires!
And every woman in PiP wishes it was her.
Lovely lovely!
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

Kristabell
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10 posted 2005-11-14 11:39 PM


Nice write.

It is amazing how fast things or ideas can change.

Kristabell

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11 posted 2005-11-14 11:47 PM


today, this sits just right
very very nice

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12 posted 2005-11-14 11:51 PM


Aww, but you see and feel so much between those lines, Dear Poet.


EA

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