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Open Poetry #36
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gelato
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since 2005-10-27
Posts 63
TN,USA
0 posted 2005-11-12 09:45 AM

She exists among the chaos,
She's her own downfall,
As if she had no choice, or say
As if she were a rag doll
Swept away by other's wishes.
Doesn't see at all.

She does not see that it could be
Different for her.
Taking on tasks not meant for her.
She complains to me
"I'll be glad when this is over."
She just doesn't see.

She changes all things, like some tide
That sweeps over us
Trying to change the features all
Just causing us stress.
I am the one who will be glad
when this is over.
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-11-12 10:00 AM


To live in chaos, is not only unpleasant, it is unhealthy. It sounds as though the time has come for each of you to move on.

I could feel the angst and agitation in your words. May peace and harmony come in to your life.

Love & Light,
Earth Angel
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