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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-11-11 10:11 AM




Nearness

When every step becomes a heart beat
That’s how I know I miss you so much
I am ashamed I still feel for you so
And when I see you, I yearn for your touch.

My heart is so ironic like that
And now I want you to disappear
There are no words that I could say
Just that I miss you when you’re near

-Juju

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-11-11 12:49 PM




written beautifully

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2 posted 2005-11-11 01:37 PM


It always seems to happen that way, thanks for sharing this.
RMW
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3 posted 2005-11-11 02:07 PM


"Just that I miss you when you're near." Beautifully said. RMW
Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2005-11-11 02:59 PM


It's harder then, isn't it?  Out of sight out of mind, or at least for a few minutes.  This one spoke to me.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Juju
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5 posted 2005-11-13 12:35 PM


Thank you for your replies.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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