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Open Poetry #36

Once upon a dream#2

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-11-05 08:48 PM

Don't let the rain fall down your face
You walk forsaken of your grace

Forgotten is your story's end
But I will not slight you, my friend

I watch you go from the window
Once thought I'd never let you go

The road is brocken and to dark
and on your face it leaves its mark

Know now that I still love you
Though I never said my adiu'

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2005-11-12 03:21 PM

I saw this several pages down, standing off by itself. Not at all the place to be after a heartfelt parting, which your words gently describe. Nicely done. Bob

crimson tear
Member

since 2003-06-07

Posts 76
Massachusetts

2 posted 2005-11-12 03:26 PM

wow this is great.

"the road is broken and too dark
and on your face it leaves it's mark"

excellent

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-11-13 12:36 PM

Well Thank you for paying some attention to it.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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