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Could it be? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Could it be? *** Could it be that you are dreaming of me? Now that our summer smiles along the fragrant avenues of clear starlit nights have turned inwards to light our lonely hearts... Now that the memories rise within our minds flooding every empty moment of sterile ache and longing… Could it be that you are dreaming of me? Do you see? Autumn tests its power on the first leaves blushing in twilight’s glow. In solemn pirouettes they ride the wind’s blow, like hushed whispers they fall, they fall. A crepuscular sadness runs through my veins keeping my heart in its cold violet grip. Yet Love’s soundtrack along our soul strings can’t be erased, ever … My thoughts focus on you where life’s charm is rooted. And I wonder... While this world turns around the sun alternating our days and our nights, we too are in constant motion. Whether awake or asleep our souls’ connection knows of no separation. Of no seasons... It knows of life’s beauty ... and I wonder... Could it be that you are dreaming of me? Could it be? *** Love, Margherita |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I'm betting there will be a soft whisper of yes....this is beautiful!  ~ ~ ~ |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
I like this one too..!!!! good job  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Definitely one for my library, Margherita!  .....jo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is simply beautiful. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Do you see? Autumn tests its power on the first leaves blushing in twilight’s glow. In solemn pirouettes they ride the wind’s blow, like hushed whispers they fall, they fall." My favorite stanza... But I liked them all... enjoyed-----------ice ><> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So beautifully expressed , Margherits answer to your question , I am sure that are Hope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita, your poetry always touches me deeply. It whispers to my soul and stirs my heart. Your poetic eloquence is incomparable. You may not post often, but you post well! Quantity is not the order of the day ~ quality is! ~ and my dear friend, you deliver! I am tucking your words away in my own personal file of poetic treasures.  Hugs with love and admiration, Linda |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whether awake or asleep our souls’ connection knows of no separation. Of no seasons... It knows of life’s beauty ... and I wonder... Could it be that you are dreaming of me? ~*~ He has to be... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear poet friends for your loving comments. May you enjoy your Sunday! Love and light. Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Oh Margherita, this beautiful love song tugged at my heart soooooo much as I always have these thoughts and dreams too; imagining if my girl is thinking and dreaming of me and yearning for me just as much as I yearn for her, hoping that she's not sad missing me and that she doesn't lose faith and go for someone else! (sigh) I'm such a helpless romantic I always blow a kiss out my window to my dream girl before I go to bed, wondering if God is delivering it to her and letting her know as long as my heart beats I will never lose faith finding her and giving her all the love she needs and everything her heart desires! God Bless You, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly lovely and sensitive, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
After reading, I am definetly dreaming of you. Jason |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful, Margherita. The dream world is the truth world wherein there's only love. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Noah for expressing so lovingly your appreciation of this poem (and all the others too!) and for bringing it back. May your dreams manifest, if there has ever been a deserving Prince, it is you! Thank you also dear Jason and dear Honeybunch for your kind comments. Dreaming IS definitely IN! Love, Margherita |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is a beautiful poem thank you so much for sharing  -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margherita This is so fully and soulfully beautiful! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Autumn tests its power on the first leaves blushing in twilight’s glow. In solemn pirouettes they ride the wind’s blow, like hushed whispers they fall, they fall." Margherita, what a fantastic photo and write! Thank you for this soulful, uplifting piece. |
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Yogi Member
since 2001-11-05
Posts 68 |
Beautiful, Awsome Write I liked Alot |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
In solemn pirouettes they ride the wind’s blow, like hushed whispers they fall, they fall. Beautiful Margherita. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Just happened to be scrolling through here and came across this absolute gem. I agree with all the above compliments and then some. It's a real keeper! Rae |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my poet friends, you warm my heart with your loving replies! Dreaming on! Love, Margherita  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Do you see? Autumn tests its power on the first leaves blushing in twilight’s glow. In solemn pirouettes they ride the wind’s blow, like hushed whispers they fall, they fall" Simply beautiful.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
awesome write, especially enjoyed this.... A crepuscular sadness runs through my veins keeping my heart in its cold violet grip. Yet Love’s soundtrack along our soul strings can’t be erased, ever … My thoughts focus on you where life’s charm is rooted. And I wonder... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you too, dear Susan and dear Lee, for the attention given to my poem and for the loving and uplifting comments. Love, Margherita |
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