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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Some How Some how I feel I gain rapport These mental images I store The charging of my phantoms wend Those windmills turn to change the end I speak of course parameters The nightly of one amateur The wish that lights a flake of know Within the endless flight of snow I speak of dust and particles The changing of all articles The integration of all grime The one way state of traveling time All this will not an avalanche But dance a leaf upon a branch Bringing laughter and a sigh And I will laugh until I die The fifer plays the rote consume And I a note and sweet of bloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you make me ponder, that the way of man, is indeed mapped out...for some particular reasoning awesome dear man, awesome thoughts and ponderings you've set up as a buffet for all to explore. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lee said it perfectly. And I will stand with my plate in hand each morning at your wonderous buffet dear Seymour. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy you speak of more than dust and particles. You write of inspirations, desires, fears and life itself. Write on my friend. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 You got me with the 'flake of know'. That blew me away.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very much enjoy, I really loved the way you explained this, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
very beautiful i love it thanks for sharing -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I speak of course parameters The nightly of one amateur The wish that lights a flake of know Within the endless flight of snow" whew, but that is cool |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 You are too cute with your metaphors in this one, Sy! Loved it!  .....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Mr. T.! "Bringing laughter and a sigh And I will laugh until I die~ ~ and the world laughs with you, Sweet Sonneteer!  Loveya! EA |
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