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Chronos
New Member

since 2005-11-10

Posts 2

0 posted 2005-11-10 01:58 PM

Her eyes turn black;
crows, ravenous flapping cold
ringing, that crow’s beating wings like
thunder,
thunder,
like thunder

Her nails; lighting strikes,
dig deep and burrow into the
innocent soil.

Fragile knife edge foot
hanging off of conductors wires,
steel baton circle legs, or
lead pencils

scampering across the parchment
paper dirt.  The brown, drab culture
depressed, bleeding like an orifice
blood, sweat, hormones.

Scrappy, calloused drumming fingers
across her pot belly stomach.  Round,
bulbous in its wake.  Protruding
indefinitely with life.

Metal rods for arms like legs,
beating her stomach
like a drum, pounding
another life like an unwanted child.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2005-11-10 02:06 PM

Welcome!!!

Really liked the picture you painted with your words and I look forward to more!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

lilyelapink
New Member

since 2005-11-09

Posts 8
UK

2 posted 2005-11-10 03:10 PM

hi! glad your here. you certainly have a way of getting yourself across. well done

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2005-11-11 08:05 AM

Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your time here, please check your email for a special greeting.....

Greeneyes~

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-11-11 08:18 AM

Welcome to the Blue Pages, and by viewing your most descriptive images, will impatiently wait for more...

Chronos
New Member

since 2005-11-10

Posts 2

5 posted 2005-11-11 08:47 AM

Thanks, I figured I'll back back into posting poetry on web sites again.

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2005-11-12 10:20 AM

Welcome to PIP

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2005-11-12 11:43 AM

Welcome to the family! Your poem reads very well aloud..sort of like a Poe verse. I enjoyed it and look forward to more from you.

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

8 posted 2005-11-12 12:04 PM

Scrappy, calloused drumming fingers
across her pot belly stomach. Round,
bulbous in its wake. Protruding
indefinitely with life.

Those lines are the best

good work

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