Open Poetry #36 |
Gone Fishin' For a Friend and her friend... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The bait was taken into the mouth as the line sang and went due south. His teeth did gnaw and strive to free this hook that held him to destiny. She pulled and tugged, fretted and cried to get this fish up over the side. She groaned and grunted, ate her pride Her modesty was all she’d hide. The fish was huge a worthy prize six foot long, a very large size. It tipped her scale at one seven three but she held on for all to see. It was the boat so long and sleek that they shared each fishing week. Casting for gold and getting a bite Till the wee hours of moonless night. And when the dawn did come again away they motored, sputtered and ran. To the dock where the boards did creak for the slats were excessively weak. When in the drink they both did fall Up to their necks, their all in all in the future they shared a towel this tall man and a blue eyed gal! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry so very...I love this...in fact, it sounds like a day in the life of me (with a few changes). |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
An excellent write Barry.. with the perfect ending. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As I started readin this, my first thought was our flower/fisher-woman...Martie...and how much she would enjoy this! But she beat me to it! Enjoyed, Magnus! "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Barry, you leave me with a gentle smile and warmed heart... Lovely lovely perspective you carve. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A "reely" great write Barry. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, This is a lovely wink, I think. Enjoyed |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
a fun read - I enjoyed |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
If I ever caught one--it would end up with me in the drink! I like this. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
yeah, this was a fun read, it made me smile thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
lol Loved your fish story! I have done the same myself! ~ and I never lived it down! lol Here's another fish story. When I was a teenager fishing with my Dad in Northern Ontario, I let a 96 pound sturgeon get away! I know how much it weighed, because the next day, a woman from Texas (go figure! They're used to everything being big down there! lol) caught a 96 pound sturgeon right where I had been fishing. I had a steel pole with 25 pound test line and when the fish bit it didn't fight like a pike or muskie, it just slowly bent my pole in half and broke the line. It acted just like a bottom-feeder fish in the sucker family of which the sturgeon is a member. My Dad darn near fried me in the fish fry (pickerel, pike, and perch)later that day because I hadn't played the monster fish correctly. That is one fish story my Dad never let me live down! He cut the photo out of the newspaper of that fish next to the woman who caught it, and he still tells everyone that that is the fish that his daughter had on the line and lost! lol Sorry for rambling, but your poem stirred up some memories for me! Thanks! ~ I think! Lovin' hugs Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-11-2005 05:38 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is cute, it's nice that they tried all types of fishing, from a boat AND from the water. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL.......I've heard of fish stories.....and then there are fishing stories. And now I've heard both within the same cute tale....caught you hook, line and sinker, huh? lol ......jo |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx, this is about a woman at our office who became divorced about two years ago and she didn't know how she would ever have another man in her life.... Well, she and her sister bought a boat from a man they knew....he took them fishing to show them how to operate everything... once turned into twice and so forth.... And from it has bloomed a wonderful friendship of two people that enjoy fishing together.. This was for them to chuckle over... Thanx all, hope you got a laugh from it. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Shared a towel with a blue-eyed gal.....yum, there ain't nothin' that can match a towel-hug! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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