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someday.....maybe |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Wishful thinking of you always is in the way that I remember you the way that my heart feels you, there and I wonder why it is the idea of letting you go is worse than death ....I would rather die than not feel this love for you.... intrinsic this need of you compels me dangerously close to foolish for believing in someday....maybe ~SEA~ |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
intrinsic this need of you compels me dangerously close to foolish for believing in someday....maybe woww , loved that part goodness sea what a write  ~wolfman |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ME TOO!!  I love this "I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And...me, 3! Just a beautiful marriage of words and graphics Susan. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan- We all have to believe in love...whether it's good for us or not. Heartfelt words here my friend...your emotion as always, I feel deep within. Beautiful write. Hugs! Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
someday is a street just off of faith, across the tracks from perhaps.. I ride there often, just looking in the windows of the stores with treasures enjoyed this suesea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"intrinsic this need of you compels me dangerously close to foolish for believing in someday....maybe" Such a tender ache to this Sue...beautifully penned. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Agreeing with my sister Enchantress. lovely SEA. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and I wonder why it is the idea of letting you go is worse than death ....I would rather die than not feel this love for you.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ tis the moth curse baby.... we live and die by that pretty blue flame.  (ykikykik) Thru the water...thru the rain |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ *sighs* ... can you hear them ? Poignantly penned my lady~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I can relate so much to this ,always wishful thinking Hope |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"this need of you compels me..." you've captured the thought, powerfully! Robert |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so very much for your wonderful replies, it means a lot to me  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loved the responses along with your words~~ you bring that out in your readers So glad to be reading you. M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and I wonder why it is the idea of letting you go is worse than death ....I would rather die than not feel this love for you.... being the childish human beings that we are, we want, what we want, when we want it, but by letting go shows the wiser, more understanding side of you, knowing but fighting the feeling, that if you wouldn't have left go, disaster would have stricken both.... full blooded woman that you are, this depicts the truest, side of you, which cannot be compared, and perhaps someday, you will both sit down again together and talk, and you'll then realize, the necessity for your decission. Hugs lady |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sea, the graphic is perfect with your pleading heart-write. ....jo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Susan, this really tigged at my heartstrings, dearest friend, I can understand just how difficult it is controlling the emotions of love, as I continue to cope with them but knowing that because my dreams are sooooooo precious and feel soooooo real and ethereal, I can't forsake them and I must believe in love or so much I believe in will just go unrequited! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I do believe with all my heart He does have a plan for every one of us and each day has its way, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"intrinsic this need of you compels me dangerously close to foolish for believing in someday....maybe" Perfectly worded. When it's real that's the way it is.. good, bad or somewhere in between. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ejoyed Sea bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hugs beautiful. i thought i still felt this ache but i think it was just gas. grins |
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