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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2005-11-07 11:12 PM



Even a cage of bone failed

covet your prize oh clever artisan

a rebellion of whispers cry, "no more"

still blossoms

these red, red, memories...

~tier

© Copyright 2005 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-11-08 01:56 AM


Tier

I really like the edgy images in this...it conveys so accurately the subject.  

Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-11-08 01:10 PM


Well done Tier.
I so much enjoy your writing.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2005-11-08 01:50 PM


You wrote my heart with yours, here...

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littlewing
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4 posted 2005-11-09 10:56 AM



Hey Lady T,

tried to email you and see its gone, just like mine is . . . hmmmm?

*smile*

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2005-11-09 01:54 PM


Martie, so nice to see your name here! Thank you!

Enchanting Enchantress, thank you so much!

serenity, beautiful depiction of tears. Did your artist daughter do that?

Littlewing, what can we do about that?

*hugs all*

~tier

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6 posted 2005-11-09 02:24 PM



Tiersdin/Sister~
A read from your inking is a treat ... ALWAYS~
*Huglets*
~*Marge/Sis*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2005-11-09 02:50 PM


Robin,

my sister, twist, did that for me.

I don't seem to have that gift, and she would clobber me for not giving her credit.

But I'll pass the compliment on to her.

thanks again


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8 posted 2005-11-09 02:53 PM


Nicely penned teardrop, tier. I always enjoy reading you.
wranx
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9 posted 2005-11-09 08:14 PM


Oh clever R.T.san

Yep...though terse, this is entirely Tier

iliana
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10 posted 2005-11-10 12:06 PM


Oh, Tier.........I think I need a hanky for this one.....very nice writing.   ....jo
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11 posted 2005-11-10 01:35 AM




(big angel hugs) Oh R.T, this is so very sad, dearest friend, the image of a silent birdcage always makes me feel sad as birds are born to sing and fly and anything otherwise leaves a feeling of void and absence! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Aenimal
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12 posted 2005-11-23 12:36 PM


speechless
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