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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Leafings In November’s reign Small dry sounds of leaves in fall Season named so well Crayon colors crunching sound Someone is lighting a match "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oooo poetry is so darn cool. thanks for this it is crisp. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful beautiful write  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....a lovely leafing, but the match scared me...here in California, danger of fire is high still.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very niceeeeeeee |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SIL.....so clever, the lighting the match part! Short but so effective in painting the landscape! ....jo |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
And a child smells the flames of Fall. What a neat reminder of that unmistakeable odor. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfect ! Love it !! hugs, Chris |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
See now, Arizona isn't all it's cracked up to be. Unless, of course, you're up north! I like this I can smell the smoke from here. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
In a controlled situation, the burning of 'fall'en dead leaves, conjures up wonderful olefactory memories for me as a little girl watching my grandfather do his annual yard clean-up. However, in a forest, matches bring about death and destruction. Many thoughts went through my mind while reading your falling words. Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you took me on a leaf walk through the night forest |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I remember that smell, The one that came after "somebody lighting a match..." To the leaf pile... The blue and gray smoke, I still see; My crossing eyes, reminded by this poem... enjoyed ---------ice ><> |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I like the quiet tension you leave us with -- that's the essence of poetry! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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