Open Poetry #36 |
With a Nod To Homer or, Ballad To My Siren |
majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
With a Nod To Homer or, Ballad To My Siren Your song does call me as a Siren’s does a sailor, But unlike Odysseus I have not a mast to fasten to, Nor men to bind me; only my own will to contend. My muscles tensed, every sinew strained As I steel myself to keep you away. Stay away, come not near; it is your eyes I fear. Sing not that song I long to hear, Lest I lose my life so dear. Perhaps Calypso is better your like; Your manner of enchanting is nigh to her’s, But you differ in spirit and body; Your charms need no supernatural assistance. And you intend not love but malice. Stay away, come not near; it is your eyes I fear. Sing not that song I long to hear, Lest I lose my life so dear. You smile so sweetly but behind I know, Lives ought but an evil glow. So perfect a picture do you paint Silhouetted against a summer sky; If I go not I feel I shall die. Stay away, come not near; it is your eyes I fear. Sing not that song I long to hear, Lest I lose my life so dear. As Merlin’s Vivien a sorceress you are, Young and fresh as spring’s morn‘, But full of cunning as a midsummer night’s dream. In all you are more powerful, For you need no ring to command my thoughts. Stay away, come not near; it is your eyes I fear. Sing not that song I long to hear, Lest I lose my life so dear. In comparing thee to the first fruit I am not wrong, You are more perfect in ripeness and flavor. But your flesh is full of worms That would infect my soul. Fie! Fie! Away; I will have none with your disease. Stay away, come not near; it is your eyes I fear. Sing not that song I long to hear, Lest I lose my life so dear. ----------- c'mon guys you all know a woman like this... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zaheer~ I wish I could tell you 'why' I liked it ... but, I don't know why I liked it ... I only know that I did~ The cadence ? The repetive verse ? I don't know ... but it must have all worked well together for me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, methinks you don't stand a chance better put your life vest on |
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