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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
And draped as she was to the arched back of chair It was a ligatures of dreams knotted across Naked thighs of phrasing that held closest Flesh to a twisted real Where hands twined strands of hair Between chapped knuckles stretching back The throat bared of vowels till of the songs sung By twilight wind upon stripped limbs There were but moans To haunt within a recessed pattern of shadows The corner of eyes She sat there As in the midst of verse I found fine glyphs Incised within the surface of stone Recounting a foreign tongued swallow of silken words Turning upon the slow lips to beg For flesh against the salt of sea so found In the wet of some midnight dream That left me spent of dry mouthed curse To bring the rain And pray a quench of such parched desire To stroke soft the curves of her In a writhe of half eyed craze Where she craved a line ellipsed A pause to breathe Braided knots untied I found the fibers within marrow As I turned a four over leaf to hitch Bared vein to hers And flow the strings of words That runs to black upon a page Another day Another tome of strangled phrase to shut hard The breath of me As she inhales and We bleed Shared veins |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
~captivating~ ~such beautiful poetry~ ~raises the gooseflesh on the soul, Chief~ love you fierce~ ~baby~ **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 my day is complete.  and this piece is haunting...in a good way. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"As in the midst of verse I found fine glyphs Incised within the surface of stone Recounting a foreign tongued swallow of silken words Turning upon the slow lips to beg For flesh against the salt of sea so found In the wet of some midnight dream That left me spent of dry mouthed curse To bring the rain And pray a quench of such parched desire To stroke soft the curves of her In a writhe of half eyed craze Where she craved a line ellipsed A pause to breathe" I love to read you....LOVE to...and you always leave me wanting more  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sighing There you are. It's like yer the National Guard of poetry or sumpthin'. I mean, I'm not complainin', but where the hell were you?  *laughing* inhale ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Heavens, it's good to read your work! *S* Excellent, my friend. *S* |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
nice write, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Damn!! Where have you been? No one takes my breath away like you do with you words. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
... It must be winter.  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron "To bring the rain And pray a quench of such parched desire To stroke soft the curves of her In a writhe of half eyed craze Where she craved a line ellipsed A pause to breathe" It has been dry around here without your words...it's very good to read you!! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
 more please.... lol ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
many... many thanks to you all... life, while mine has not been the aftermath of a hurricane nor someof the other disasters that have plagued the country this year... life has been interesting.. and is changing.. so, my time and access to the forum as well has been severly limited. so..apologies to all... for the lack of replies...and for dropping off the face of the earth... hugs m'friends... and the best of wishes for you all. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~sigh~ "The throat bared of vowels till of the songs sung" Ron, the next time you drop off? just remember some of us hold our breath while awaiting your re-entry   |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
A pause to breathe '''' good to see you here.....amazing you.... hugsss |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
As in the midst of verse I found fine glyphs Incised within the surface of stone Recounting a foreign tongued swallow of silken words Turning upon the slow lips to beg For flesh against the salt of sea so found In the wet of some midnight dream That left me spent of dry mouthed curse whoa...I gotta tell you, you not only amaze, with your stories, but truly make the reader ache for more...this was tremendous, tintilating, mysterious, and full, simply full of open air visuals for the mind to go anywhere with. Marvelous write! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where she craved a line ellipsed A pause to breathe ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I see you havent lost your touch...but then I never thought you would... "passing grains of sand...carried by the flow...rivers never sleep" I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Dynamic...that's the word for this, and for all your poetry. Yes, dynamic will do just fine.....depth, power, energy, movement, change that comes quickly even within stasis....dynamic. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Fabulous! |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
Wow! Very pleasing write. I wasn't ready for it to end but the ending is also perfect! Great write! Thanks for sharing, pictureme2 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
sometimes, when i read you, i imagine myself exhaling quickly ..and a bunch of dust escaping from my mouth.. that's what my words become, cpat! dust! you leave me in it with such powerful poetry. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
My humble..and sincere thanks to you all who have read and commented..or just passed by... the company I work for is being sold and the summer months have come and gone, with me being involved in the secretive world of providing data for negotiations, deceiving the people around me who didn't know what is going on...and coming to terms with the death of my mother.... tomorrow.... brings a new set of problems to solve as I work to figure out what to do with the rest of my working life..try to find a job...go into business for myself..or what.... my absence..will continue.. but I wanted to thank you all...and to let those who might come back to this and read...know what is going on... for those of you with my old e-mail address, be advised...it won't get to me any longer and I have not established an new one.. many many.. heartfelt thank yous... to all who have read and supported my feeble efforts here.. may god bless.... you all |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do check in when you can, our Friend... Soon! . |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I know you.. you're still writing.. maybe even reading. maybe you had the right idea..to just drop off the face of the earth.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
no...he didn't darn it...I miss reading him so much |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I wonder if he will read this from some other desk in another place, another time and miss us too...I want to think so. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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