Open Poetry #36 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Old boats Docked in the harbor Their engines still And all sails down They rise— and fall Then rise— and fall again With the tides From dawn to dusk Throughout the night Yet stay where they are It is dead winter— With the air very cold The waters nearly frozen And there’s nowhere to go Or nowhere to go Where they haven’t been before A fine— white snow Just drops from the sky In silence Not comment On a vacant sea |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Ahhhh, but the commercial fishermen and women still return to the sea in the winter. A lovely description of a place I have visited many times. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
every word written here was beautiful and delicate i could feel the cold. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
the waving emotion of a heart. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ENJOYED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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