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Open Poetry #36

real eyes

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-10-25 08:09 AM

I imagined you
pressing your heart to mine
with just skin between us
and our day dreams

I imagined your hair
on my fingertips
as they weaved whispers
with a kiss now and then

as it fell over bare shoulders
and I imagined you
slow dancing your woman
with no hands

just the freefall love of you
becoming the rain
and watering my desert
with the soft storms of you

and now I real eyes you

__________

dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-10-25 08:19 AM

You manipulate words
so well...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-10-25 07:56 PM

DarkOne~
Oh my ... this took me on a beautiful word-trip~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-10-25 08:26 PM

perfection of word play babe.
good to see ya hon

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

4 posted 2005-10-25 08:29 PM

this is a nice write, full of emotion of what you feel, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2005-10-31 06:01 AM

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-10-31 06:56 AM

I imagined you
pressing your heart to mine
with just skin between us
and our day dreams

I imagined your hair
on my fingertips
as they weaved whispers
with a kiss now and then

loved the above~~

M

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