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Clandestine Corners Of The Heart
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Clandestine Corners Of The Heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Clandestine Corners Of The Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~ In the quiet of hush-come-hush there is the gentlest of rush That beckons me to places divine Moments of clandestine find~ Memories of a yesteryear that often finds a tender tear Laying in a pool unshed in corners of the heart in dread~ A secret place not mentioned in the rhyme Perhaps forgotten in spill of time Then again … when in least of expect it chokes me, circumspect~ Leaves me breathlessly hoping to maintain the realize of love lost in pain Thoughts clandestine of you and me that clamor ever … to be free~ ~Sometimes the thoughts circle simply because Bill and I play Scrabble, searching for the double meanings of this language~ *This one is Scrabble-Inspired* ~Here ya' go, Tweetie~ ~*~ clan·des·tine adj.Kept or done in secret, often in order to conceal an illicit or improper purpose. cir·cum·spect adj.Heedful of circumstances and potential consequences, prudent. ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge...I love this piece.. not just because it is a great write.. But, I LOVE Scrabble!!!  I do hope you are in a safe area with Wilma coming. Hugs~Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
marge ,,,, dang this really pulled on my heart ... you found words i could not find and pieced them into the puzzle right where they belong .... bravo ~wolfy |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is a very nice write, very heartfelting, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
I enjoyed this... the second stanza was my favorite one. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..very lyrical and sweet...much enjoyed spiros -- |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Beautiful write...Madame Marge. Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Wonderful poem and you are a master at using complex words! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Verbena Member
since 2005-10-17
Posts 196Australia |
Dear Marge A great poem! I love scrabble but I have no one that will play the game with me. Thank you for enhancing my vocabulary! Love Verbena xo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ Greatly appreciate each reply~ It's sooooo fun to share~ LOVE SCRABBLE ... wishing you could all gather for a game~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge you are amazing. Getting poetry ideas from a game |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhBetts~ You know me (a looooong time you know me) ... a game, a sound, a photo ... doesn't take much to trigger my little muses~VanDana~ Thank you, dear~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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