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....to not feel you...
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....to not feel you... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Tonight I bleed these emotions... Purging rivulets of random thoughts memories and always more questions then there are answers to and it chokes my reasoning until I have nothing left of coherent speech but this feeble mumbling sad little whimpering in place of my voice calling your name damn this viscous ache determined not to be cried out instead coagulating in my soul defying my self induced need to not feel you there beating wildly under my skin ~SEA~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and I am smiling, because when I just wrote you, I almost asked if we could duet--but this is what you needed to write and I'm nodding, because I know--it's a thing of dearest intimacy that demands privacy. Thanks for sharing you Sue.  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
(oh I would love to write with you...)  now I gotta go check my email! thank you  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Penned with your tears Sue..this absolutely aches! Hugs~Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sweet sensitivty. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity, aren't you glad she doesn't keep everything private?  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you ladies, very much! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan, you have certainly written the emote well within this piece. Well done! |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
love this, all of it, but... might u not call me? No? 2 far away such a shame |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea. and then we tug at the fuzzy blanket and our feet say no... and we realize we just need extra nice work ms |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Understanding this.... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Ahhhh Susan, Nice to see you here. As usual wearing your heart on your sleeve, one of the things I love about ya though. Have missed you. Please take care. I'll write you an e-mail soon. Amy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
damn this viscous ache determined not to be cried out instead coagulating in my soul defying my self induced need to not feel you there beating wildly under my skin ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you KNOW Im loving this one... ahhhh... the ache has inspired a moth anthem.  love the angsty depth of this one Susan...very cool |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Oh Susan, I can't say I know this feeling that you feel, but I long ever so much to feel that feeling of another's heart beating inside of me, as you can sense from the emotions in my new poems, and I can imagine the ache of reaching your hand across your body one day and not being able to feel it, afraid it is missing! (sigh) This is a most sensitive and honest write, dearest friend, you always write with such pure heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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