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Rain in the night
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Rain in the night |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Rain in the night Raindrops play at the window like wild drummers. The rhythm stirs my senses bidding for admission into my mind, busy with chatter and clatter. Magnetized I let the sound expand within my heart turning into a tambourine. Drawn to explore my core I sink into my center where there is only this sound of the rain meeting my breath. Laughter and tears joy and sorrow right and wrong dance hand in hand through the night at the rhythm of the rain. And gold is filtered out by the countless rivulets of tears. And then I step out of myself merging with the night merging with the rain following the throbbing invitation to travel along the sound waves of my soul ... to meet you. Now I am the night I am the light I am the rain I touch the infinite within the sound of my breath mingled with the drumming drops of rain. What a gift this night this rain this peace of mind this tune of love this sacred crystal essence ... of you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita A wonderful ride on a magic carpet of words.  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is beautiful Margherita. The way your words have formed like raindrops cascading down a pane of blue glass. Keepin' this!! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So beautiful Margherita. Love, Eric |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
lovely imagery  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita, I stand in awe of your inner and outer cosmic visions and of your poetic beauty. I could read you into forevermore. You write as I feel, and think, and see ~ and aspire...  Linda  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you blend with the rain without separtion between lovely words and sentiment |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Margherita - this is an enchanting write! Loved the ending. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margherita I understand how this is. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
nice My spirit will rise |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my dear poet friends for reading and commenting so lovingly. Love and have a beautiful weekend! Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"And then I step out of myself merging with the night merging with the rain following the throbbing invitation to travel along the sound waves of my soul ..." My favorite lines of this song..... enjoyed ------------ice ><> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is just too cute and romantic, sweet friend, such innocent love and spirit fills this enchanting write, yay! (angel friendship hugs) Normally I don't quite enjoy standing out in the rain alone, but I can't imagine a kiss more romantic and sensual than one in the summer rain, with soft hair and lips soused in joy, one I dream so much to have, yay! God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Margherita, I went searching for your poetry tonight and found this one which I had not posted to before. Rain does have that kind of effect on me to -- enjoyed the way you put it! Happy New Year to you and yours! ....jo |
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silverwind Junior Member
since 2005-12-07
Posts 37that place over there |
To lay in bed and listen to the sound of the rain on the window is like good medicine to an illness. Liked the imagery in this. silverwind |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are many things, all beautiful....... this is a lovely expression of love and passion. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How nice to come back and find your replies on this poem of a while ago, my dear friends. Thank you for your appreciation! Happy New Year to each of you, loving souls and beautiful poets! Love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gosh, I have missed reading you, no wonder I have felt out of sorts, you bring me back to Earth. I am the night I am the light I am the rain |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful, Margherita! I love the rain too. - Owl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarlingMargherita~ *sighing* at the beauty of this and you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Raindrops play at the window like wild drummers. The rhythm stirs my senses bidding for admission the entire poem was poetic magnificance, but this was my favorite. From beginning to end, could feel the rain... lovely and well done, thanks so much for the read |
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