Open Poetry #36 |
Paleness of Complexion |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Even a moment that would bring us together translates into "white noise" life for me. Dismissing the worries and needed decisions that an outsider can only imagine, can speak the words "I understand" when really, how can they. Where there is peace, there are you-thoughts to rock me into dream passages where shadows no longer stalk, and tears result from laughter and the complexion of monotony turns to tender touching thrills. I question to get the answers, the words my senses need to hear. I am a challenge within a challenge waiting to rise above it all. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MissWinterOfBliss~ 'I am a challenge within a challenge waiting to rise above it all.' And I want to be here to read what wonderous ink your pen will find when you do~ Grandma called it 'porcelain complexion' ...~ You are a word-cameo of a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, And as challenges go, you are a pleasant one. Guess I wouldn't claim to understand but I do claim to care. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I question to get the answers, the words my senses need to hear. I am a challenge within a challenge waiting to rise above it all." And rise above it you will Maureen. Sending heart hugs your way... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Beautifully written, and... Where there is peace, there are you-thoughts to rock me into dream passages where shadows no longer stalk, and tears result from laughter and the complexion of monotony turns to tender touching thrills. ... I remember that... couldn't of said it better. "If this grand panaorama before me is what you call God... then God is not dead." |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Good write, I needed to hear this today. Challenges anew. This poem was magnificent. Thank You for allowing me to see this today, a wonderful write indeed! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
once again you rise above the challenge Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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