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The Storm
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The Storm |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan 
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The Storm Clouds of black. The thunder claps as lightning dances across the darken sky, tears of rain fall. Trees swaying with music of the wind. As hail plays drums upon roof tops. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
wonderful visuals that come to life. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I find thunderstorms exhilarating! You captured their essence with this vividly descriptive write! You should leap off your lily pad and seek shelter whenever once comes to the pond to avoid being zapped! ~ Fried froggy legs! ~ Perish the thought!   Huggums, Linda |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you JamesMichael. Marcel thank-you.Glad you were able to see the visable. Linda, Thank-you for the comment. I am actually terrified of thunderstorms. :-) Thank-you all again for the comments |
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