Open Poetry #36 |
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Emotional Death |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes ![]() |
I'm tattered Torn, broken, lying on the floor I don't have the love to give I'm lost, So fragile I don’t want to hurt anymore Yet, I continue on the path That led me here to this place Aching, longing, yearning for release From the darkness in which I dwell Never to see the light Of happiness Again This is respectfully dedicated to a friend that I was talking to online this morning... I hope she stops in and sees it. When all is said |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
It seems so much less dark and dreary when its coming for you. It's cheered me up too! Now... its my turn to thank you... for pushing me and getting me to write, because its been awhile and I didn't I guess I just needed a little shove... The poem is very good, and I think I know how it feels... lol and it feels a little bit less incomplete. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
c'mere Lazarus, give us a hug and forgive me I'm a bit stressed out these days ![]() |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Kellie- Thanks for reading... It is much appreciated. Karen- Always too kind with your encouragement. Only one question... forgive you for what?? ![]() When all is said |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An empathic, compassionate write. And I send a loving, healing hug for whom it was written. Love & Light, Linda |
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