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Open Poetry #36

Float on down

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-10-17 11:33 PM

sing to me the sweet
whispers of yesterday
take me to the place
of may

where you and i were by
each other sides where
for once I felt just right

fly me to the clouds and
lift me up onto the air
get that excited feeling
when you are there

but it all had to end yes
this zen couldent go on
and last forever

same old story again I
liked him more then he
could bare

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2005-10-18 05:41 PM

Nice writing...there is a time in every relationship when common sense and reasoning should override emotion and desire...if this time is served, many one sided relationships could be avoided...I know its not easy...James

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