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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-10-17 04:33 AM


under shadows

the last pink
and white roses—

three sparrows
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1 posted 2005-10-17 05:35 AM

Much enjoyed again. Beautiful!

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2 posted 2005-10-17 10:32 AM

John, I am in awe of your writing, and also of nature's gift to us - October roses - many of them here in Ontario.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg
Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-04-23 01:11 AM

peaceful little song if the three sparrows are not fighting.
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