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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-10-09 08:57 AM

The first few
that make love
over summer's shadow,

do they dance with
or against the wind?

from the naked sky,
how do they land
with such precision,
when they fly
without wings?

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2005-10-09 09:05 AM

.... where ever they wish!!

     its really in Fate's hands ....

  nice write

  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2005-10-09 11:20 AM

Now this is very good.

With your permission, I would like
to include this in my WORD files
of poems by others. If the answer
is yes, what name would you want
associated with it?

Again, very very good.

John

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-10-09 12:27 PM

Awww, but they do have wings, Dear Goddess! ~ as do your poetic words. It is just that they are invisible to the human eye!

EA

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

4 posted 2005-10-10 08:07 PM

Made me smile

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-10-10 08:22 PM

Beautiful Michele..
love the visuals in this.
Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2005-10-10 08:25 PM

Beautiful vision you plant! Love this!

miscellanea

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-10-11 02:28 AM

Beautiful Ms Ink *smile*

yup...

mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2005-10-11 10:19 AM

Thankyou for this Michele !!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-10-11 10:28 AM

Michele, your a work of art...

enjoyed!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2005-10-21 04:40 PM

I love when you write of trees...
you always do them such justice.
another gem of pen from your leafy muse

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2005-10-21 06:20 PM

good read

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2005-10-21 08:04 PM

As always, you gift us with a cool write, Mish!
~leafs me in smile~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

13 posted 2005-10-22 09:49 AM

Not yet grown mature
Shadowed by something above
Young leaves reached to touch

But knew no perfect landing spot,
'til off they flew, hand in hand.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

14 posted 2005-10-22 10:15 AM

such a joy to have read, thanks for sharing this.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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