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Open Poetry #36

Wash Away

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2005-10-21 06:29 PM

I want you to wash away my tears,
I don't want you
to wash away my dreams,
The way to my heart,
Don't wash away
All the things to my life,
It is my life,
Wash away,
Come to me
But wash away my tears,
Don't let it burn,
Every moment I spent,
Turn away,
To the dreams I have away,
Wash away,
All the other things
Wash away to my heart,
Wash away the ocean,
Ocean waves,
Wash away,
Wash away.....

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

1 posted 2005-10-21 06:32 PM

as usual, simple words strung to give a profound meaning

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2005-10-22 03:57 AM

A very touching way to express the yearning for that kind of love and caring that wipes the tears away.
Lovely, dear Vandana.

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-10-22 06:52 AM

Smiling at you...
understanding this poem,
and in awe of your growth
in writing...

keep panning that talent, Vandana...

the gold is showing.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2005-10-22 09:24 AM

Tears are souls cleanser
Their salt, the pumice that scrubs
Bitter for reason

A lovers hand is the brush,
And loving kisses dilute.

This poem is a fine car that has driven me to words....

enjoyed
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