Open Poetry #36 |
Since You Have Been Gone |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Since You Have Been Gone Having you upon my mind Gazing a wide blue yonder Since you have been gone My heart had grown fonder Whilst viewing the horizon Far across the ocean blue In your absence tears flow Because I am missing you Thinking of you as always While waves lap the shore Overwhelmed with longing As I yearn more and more Your absence is being felt Here as I knelt by the sea Waves depart as I ponder Hoping you remember me HopeĀ©2005 Link to poem with music and graphic below http://thestarlitecafe.com/poems/93/poem_781166.html |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Hope, this is very beautiful, even if so deeply melancholic. And how you manage the length of the line so precisely!! You are very good! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ So many moments bring those we love and have loved to our minds and hearts~ Lovely, lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is very sweet thanks for sharing -may the force be with you in poetry |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hope, this is lovely....and it is laid out in perfection. ....jo |
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