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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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chewing my hands free from chemical fumes weeping in an element of perception birds in foursquare prototypes like sounds taking over, casual quiet… face me with molten rock, as the aura changes forming “us” an attention-grabbing bridge one with questions of topography… like a trained soldier kills a poetic breath of optical significance jingles in the pockets of visual effects returning unusual patterns into some finalized get together i am the inner necessity to construct time inside out…menstruation of divergent worlds growing latitudes, often silent…sunlight never stutters nor arranges old form languages, yet, penetrates suggesting an abundant outpour of somebody’s story it dominates features of claustrophobic bonds therein i move, callused to the rhyme between communications, like a savage carved to stone i am that every glance of first step acting like leap year’s bones but inside i bleed the despair, the fear, spitting up anxiety building a fantastic fable, for a festival of events and the reputation of a work in progress where lives recall the near miss values of this surreal voyage, this cross country empty space in search of something spot on tour-de-france makes little sense but it’s what reveals me orally spitting me out like a storyteller into black and white i may not live life the same but, at the end of each day at least i’ve written something that makes little sense except to me... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ It's the hope of touching others that makes us fly and you fly. Good morning sweety. |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this was very good thnk you for writing this LeeJ  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
at least i’ve written something that makes little sense except to me... ~*~ Wanna bet? Made sense to me, too... I sat here and sang your song out loud in a quiet voice, and heard your heart and felt your muscle... of tone, and time, and tender... and trust. I especially felt, trust.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
"a poetic breath of optical significance jingles in the pockets of visual effects" Many brilliant lines, and this my favorite. Such class! I always enjoy reading you LeeJ. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Brava, LeeJ! You are an extraordinary poetess! ......jo |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Lee , much of this makes sense to me , yes from inside out we express, writing gave me a voice , so I am always work in progress Hope |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes, those things we think make sense only to us end up touching the most people. *S* Excellent write, my friend! *S* |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love It. :-) |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
...and you leave me basking in a mesmeric wonderland of awe.. awed by all my eyes and senses read and feel. ...i am transposed and left wandering in a translucent world of your rhythmicity.. hardly understanding all i feel, yet appreciating you more each time i read... your name, your words, draw my mouse like a magnet to your space in this home of blue. thank you, martyjo [This message has been edited by latearrival (10-06-2005 11:13 AM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"i may not live life the same but, at the end of each day at least i’ve written something that makes little sense except to me..." Lee J: I hear ya sweetie. Enjoyed this read very much. Or Mucho! JL |
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