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Open Poetry #36

Dream

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-09-21 02:01 PM

The pain how it
engulfs me,I fall
asleep on a pillow
of tears and failed
dreams.

Hoping everytime im
waking up from a bad
dream,I sleep a silent
slumber of corraded
lies

Wishing up to the sky
please please let this
part of me die,erase this
memory make it a mere
bad dream

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-09-21 02:43 PM

The pain is felt in this well written outcry for release.

You already have the solution ready here too ... it's just a bad dream.

Despite the tears, you are optimistic.

Love,
Margherita

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2005-09-21 03:14 PM

I try to

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

3 posted 2005-09-21 04:34 PM

this sounds depressing. . sorry .... i hope things get worked out.. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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