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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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the warmth breeds and multiplies and multiplies multiplies creating breedingmultiples drawing the breeding and multiplies creatingbreeding lashing the windwaterwarm creating chaos of multiplebreeding wavewaterwind creating howl and multiplying scream and water breeding chaos and a lone cry multiplied over waterwindscreaming breeding arms waving waving waving multiplied created like hair waving in a strongscreamingwind blowing water in a breeding flooding eye blowing slowly creating eye multiplying zero like a wavewater eye a calm jail like an eye |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You caught up the whirl of this wind and left it moaning... Good to see you, Bri... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The howl is heard in this well structured piece. Love, Margherita |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
the screaming and breeding is so scary... it's hell unleased.  very well said Brian. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow !! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the way you toss the words about fits the content, makes the reader FEEL the multiplying winds, the rushing waves |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
AMAZING!!!! ~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You captured it alright, and let's throw in a little fear shall we?  |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
wow, very nice.. thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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