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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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An abandoned cabin Has a broken window A single spider has made his web Across the locked front door The surrounding ground Overgrown with weeds A rusty shovel Against the wall A once blue car In the mute backyard A plastic feeder Minus seed Just offshore A boat for two Lies sunken in the sea |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
One paradise lost and another found ... Intriguing! Love, Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I think I could paint this scene, in pale bluish grey |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
yessum this is very nice.. thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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