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I wonder |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China 
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Eomtions brimming over like boiling water Your bags are packed, yet your heart is not Eyes focussed on the glow of the city Yet your mind has not left the side of your love Thoughts pace back and forth Everything is pressing down as if you were Atlas The days slip away as do the words Like a toy soldier your smile is painted on Feeling so very alone Giving everything up for a through of the dice Has your luck run out, or just begun The buzzing of a miilion ideas will not disapear A balancing act with out a wire commences Not finding your balance, even though solid ground is beneath you The ravens words echo inside You realize this to be true The love that you once held so high Will be nevermore Though these happenings occur It still feels like a movie and everything will work out Praying that this dream is true The planes engines begin to rev Your eyes become wide Everything crashes down like a house of cards You know those faces you leave behind will never be the same Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
You mispelled "Emotions" on the top of the page. Poems like this are flat dry and feel dead in a material reality. Maybe its just the manor in whicn its perceived. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Giving everything up for a throw of the dice ... Sometimes when situations stagnate this can be an act of courage. You wonder and make the reader wonder too. Love, Margherita |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
oh so true there.. and thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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