Nights That Could Have Been

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Open Poetry #36

Nights That Could Have Been

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-09-21 05:24 PM

Nights That Could Have Been

She wanted a man to hold her loosely,
he wanted a woman to hold him tight,
how bad he felt to miss the pleasure,
of nights that could have been so nice.

JamesLee
September20
2005
Just writing.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-09-21 06:18 PM

~understanding this~

yv
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

2 posted 2005-09-21 06:21 PM

Oh how beautifully saddening. I too know the feeling of wanting something so bad that it just seems an eternity away...lovely write!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-09-21 06:57 PM

so nicely written James with a touch of sadness to it. Well done sir.

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2005-09-21 07:46 PM

Sadly beautiful....**big hugs**

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

5 posted 2005-09-21 07:56 PM

very nice and it is sad in the end..

thanks for sharing tho

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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