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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-09-15 01:24 AM



The light of stars
From so far away
Which themselves
May have gone the way
Of those who are
Or once were bright

Somehow tonight
Without words they speak

Above the noise
Of passing cars

On modern roads
That wherever they go
Still end the same
As all before


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Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-16 08:17 AM


----Huan----
    Thanks for sharing.. This was well written

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-04-25 08:47 PM


how you wrote this? this so beautiful.

Don't you think great poets are all like this?
the light of the good poems will forever travels and  shine in eyes of whomever catch them. even if the source of the light has gone.

I love this one.

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