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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2005-09-16 02:25 AM


In the end
And out of rhyme

Three white mice
Bent on revenge

That played a joke
On all mankind

And made God laugh
While angels sighed


http://www.foxnews.com/story/0,2933,169520,00.html


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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-16 08:21 AM

----Huan Yi----
    This is good.. Kinda cute with the whole mice thing lol...  Thanks for sharing.. I had a good smile in this one... but ofcourse in a way that I like it

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-04-25 08:52 PM

anything will make you write a nice poem.

meanwhile I am eating chocolate given by a dear friend who snatched the whole box of Godiva from her over-weight teen daughter. Have not had my drink for today yet.

have a laugh and be happy!!!
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