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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-09-14 08:41 PM

I did something wrong
My dreams tell me so
Beneath I found an agate
But truthfully not so
for I turned it over

Twas something alien:
Alive, but not for long
Each breath like a machine
long, loud, and lusting air

For then I told my love
whom I lied naked with
And he told me, his love
twas oppertunity,
To have such a rare thing

But alas twas taken
Now dead and beaten down
So was his love for me
given to some one else
A woman tall, thin, and sharp

And so I walked back home
robbed and alone again
behind me lurked a wolf
I bet he wished to eat,
but enjoyed the game more

Yet, behind the window
The wolf was powerless
I screamed and cried out loud
and the hungry wolf morphed
Until the wolf became
Oprahs "little girl"

And then at that moment
Before I had awoke
I was finally safe.

ps: this was metaphorically speaking
Sorry I accidently had the message above inserted in the poem

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

[This message has been edited by Juju (09-14-2005 11:09 PM).]

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

1 posted 2005-09-14 09:22 PM

That sounds like a nightmare to me. Wonderfully written.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-09-14 09:46 PM

omg! This sounds pretty sad.. Love shows here of how powerful it is.. Well said..thanks for sharing....

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2005-09-15 07:49 PM

it seems funny but true ...

    when things start going wrong we first look
          at ourselves as the blame.

         Maybe its wasn't "us" but another
           that caused such an ache to a wonderful
                 dream ....

       a deep write

  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2006-01-26 01:00 AM

Thank you so much for your post I can't believe I didn't get to this. your incite into my poem helped me alot.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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