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Open Poetry #36

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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-10-08 08:41 PM

I remember your green eyes
Even though I was just six
Later, your green eyes turned brown
But your red fur still would shine

You loved to play with frisbies

There were these flower shaped ones
And you'd carry them around
With your head through the center
So that twas your doggy crown

You really loved the cabin

You would chase them darn squarls good
Right up all the old oak trees

O the boat rides you adored

You'd stand on the boat's front-edge
As the wind would catch your ears
So they perked up like a bat
And your tongue hanged out your mouth

I'll always miss you lucy

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-10-08 08:57 PM

Awwwww...what wonderful memories for you!
Well done...excellent imagery.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2005-10-09 09:58 PM

beautifully said.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2006-01-26 12:56 PM

thank you for you reply, I regret not spotting it earlier.

-Juju

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