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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2005-09-13 02:44 PM



Beyond the pale
Decaying with time

Under dim gray skies
The white
Falling down

She glides
As if to say
Across the seen

Even in winter
Beauty somehow
Will have its way


© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2005-09-13 04:04 PM


What a lovely, peaceful poem.  I've often seen beauty in ruins.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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2 posted 2007-04-26 04:01 PM


Dear John, I have to say that this is one of my favorite. It is one of the spirits in your poems...."beauty always has its way."

to read from died one, I imagine that one is alive

to read from a live one, I imagine that he stood on marble pedestal.

thank you for the precious sharing.

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