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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2005-09-12 12:29 PM



Green Eyes
Was one
Bad
Cat

I mean
No mad dog
Mess with them claws
No Sir

Him
Comin’ down that street
Enough
To scare the hair
Off a any wanna be killer

And the ladies
Oh my Missy
How they loved that kitty

I can see him now
Settin’ on the porch—steps
King of the whole wide world

Ain’t been nothin’ like him
Since he been gone

Down under the ground
Probably a terror to the Devil hisself

(Mention his ghost
Nough to keep these pups in line)

Yes Mam

That Green Eyes
Was one bad cat

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Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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1 posted 2005-09-12 11:09 AM


LOL cats are funny creatures....

never experineced one running to his parent..but they do love to run in packs and hunt together..

Very cool John.


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2005-09-12 11:51 AM


I still think you have a unique way of saying things.... this reads like the start of a great play...

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA
3 posted 2005-09-12 01:04 PM


This is good..  Thanks for sharing
Huan Yi
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Waukegan
4 posted 2005-09-12 02:03 PM




I tell you true

I seen dat cat
Jump up high in da sky
An’ snatch bald da head
Off a big ol owl—
Take his mouse too

Lordy
If dat cat knowed they alive
He’d a been hunting wolves

If he been a down by da water
He’d a gone down to the harbor
An’ catch them great white sharks
An’ barracuda for dinner

Oh Mama
Dat was one bad cat


Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
5 posted 2007-04-26 04:25 PM


nice poem and another nice poem and the tail.

I tried to feel this one and another poem of the  very big deal of CBE. I sat in front of the Blue for straight 5 minutes to feel and I felt nothing. I have to go back to imagine the big brush in a shaking hand attached to a trembling arm jointed to the tottering shoulder holding a drunk head.  no wonder, i forget my drink today.

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