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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-09-11 11:17 PM



Little breeds
From sour seeds
Growing in discontent

Time colludes
With other truths
To nurture disillusionment

A fallow
Gray attraction
Worn in older clothes
Vintaged dissatisfaction
Yet no one only knows

What wanting burning
Their mutually yearning
A plane in torrid throes

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2005-09-13 10:32 AM


Enjoyed this!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
2 posted 2005-09-13 01:17 PM


very beautifully written....thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2005-09-13 05:29 PM


Beautiful flow...James
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-04-26 03:53 PM


How do you know so well? right to the core with a poem.

hard to judge though.

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