Open Poetry #36 |
Office Romance |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Little breeds From sour seeds Growing in discontent Time colludes With other truths To nurture disillusionment A fallow Gray attraction Worn in older clothes Vintaged dissatisfaction Yet no one only knows What wanting burning Their mutually yearning A plane in torrid throes |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Enjoyed this! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very beautifully written....thanks for sharing Poetry can get you very far |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful flow...James |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
How do you know so well? right to the core with a poem. hard to judge though. |
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