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Martie

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0 posted 2005-09-10 07:14 PM

Like the warm wind in a spring time Mohave
I feel your thoughts on me
Your medic bag slung heavy upon your shoulder
You rush to my side like rain in Sedona

You put your ear to the rushing of my heart
As the sky falls within me
Though I know that time leaks faster
Still you bend to my relief

I am not without portent or guile
When your fingers are on my pulse
I weave with threads a jacket made of gold
and still the singing winds in you are cold

The air is clean with release of thought
Within the breath of me no longer caught
And I would edge the spreading tree of leaf
To know you feel my arms fast opening cleave

[This message has been edited by Martie (09-10-2005 07:45 PM).]

Margherita
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Eternity

1 posted 2005-09-10 07:18 PM

Oh, dear Martie, this is so beautiful and a delight to read!
Love,
Margherita

Angelheart
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2 posted 2005-09-10 07:32 PM

I really liked this poem too..

so poetic

icebox
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in the shadows

3 posted 2005-09-10 08:05 PM

I like the rain in Sedona. *grin*

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-09-10 08:10 PM

Beautiful dear Martie...stunningly beautiful
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2005-09-10 09:31 PM

This is just beautiful, and a delight to read.

ice
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Pennsylvania

6 posted 2005-09-10 09:40 PM

A real as life, romantic poem, dear Martie...

A string of emotions beaded with longing and memories...as lovely as it is sad..

-----------ice
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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2005-09-10 09:41 PM

I weave with threads a jacket made of gold
and still the singing winds in you are cold

The air is clean with release of thought
Within the breath of me no longer caught

~*~

Plan for some plain talk
on that plane we share....
if you're able
Sunday....

iliana
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8 posted 2005-09-10 11:40 PM

I would pull out the same lines as Sunshine. Martie....this is a keeper for sure. It is absolutely poetic and profound the way you've said it.

......jo

Goodknight
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9 posted 2005-09-11 01:34 PM

Martie - terrific - it is just great - I love this - lots of feelings and images here for sure - thanks - Paul

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-09-11 01:44 PM

Martie
I am always caught in your gust of wind.

Ratleader

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11 posted 2005-09-12 12:38 PM

I once heard someone refer to you as "a poet of the heart"....

If there were ever any doubt, this poem would settle it. There's love in every line, and as welcome, I'm sure, as that Sedona rain.

Keep doing this, dear lady....you make this place bloom!

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Angelheart
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12 posted 2005-09-12 01:11 PM

this is good.. thanks for sharing.....

Obsidian Snow
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13 posted 2005-09-12 01:29 PM

Sweetly seductive.

scorpio
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right...there

14 posted 2005-09-12 01:52 PM

This is a stunning write Martie.

believe in what your heart feels...

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2005-09-12 02:16 PM

....SAVED faster than you can say "Sedona"!

The following passages are poetically ~ and romantically! ~ amazing!

"You rush to my side like rain in Sedona"

~ a slaked thirst to be sure!!!

"You put your ear to the rushing of my heart
As the sky falls within me"

~ It gives Chicken Little's words "The sky is falling", a whole different meaning! lol

Marti, you are like a fine Bordeaux that gets better with age!

Hugs with love,
Linda

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2005-09-12 02:30 PM

MartieSis~

There is such beauty in you ... and I'm so ever-thankful that you share it with us~

'You put your ear to the rushing of my heart
As the sky falls within me
Though I know that time leaks faster
Still you bend to my relief'

One tenth of your talent is all I'd want~
Share with a 'sis' ? ... would ya' now ?

*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Dark Angel
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17 posted 2005-09-12 04:23 PM

Ed is right, you do make this place bloom.

Beautiful flower you are my honeysuckle Martie

it's a

love you

Mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

vandana

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18 posted 2005-09-12 05:38 PM

good read

Magnus

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19 posted 2005-09-12 08:51 PM

Your title, the lines....so close to me
in my own way...thanx Martie...

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